Matt Lane · Notes← All notes
2026-09-11 · Writing & craft

On Writing

**2026**

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Good writing can be generated from linguistic competence.

Great writing often begins earlier—with a particular consciousness encountering the world.

**Write from perception, attention, and discovery.** Writing is not merely the reporting of a conclusion you already possess. It is a way of thinking. Pay attention to what is actually there, especially to what catches your attention and why. Learn the names of things. Prefer the particular thing to the generic category when the distinction matters; naming accurately is part of seeing accurately. Stay with the perception long enough for it to complicate, sharpen, or change what you thought you knew. Let the sentence participate in the discovery rather than merely record its result.

**Write with implication.** Give the reader enough evidence to reach the intended inference without explaining that inference afterward. If the meaning is already available in what you have shown, do not restate it. Let selection, juxtaposition, omission, and emphasis do some of the work. Leave the reader something to complete.

**Let distinctness come from the writer’s way of seeing.** Distinct writing does not come primarily from unusual vocabulary, conspicuous style, or verbal cleverness. It comes from perception expressed through sentences: what the writer notices, details what is noticed, distinguishes, questions, values, returns to, or finds difficult to ignore. Voice is not merely a sound added to the prose. It is partly the trace of a mind attending to the world in its own way.

**Make form answer to meaning.** The sentence should not merely contain the thought. At its best, its syntax, rhythm, pacing, emphasis, and structure participate in the thought. A sentence can accumulate, hesitate, accelerate, fracture, balance, or withhold because the meaning requires it—not because the writer wants an impressive effect.

**Revise by judgment, not by polish alone.** Revision is not simply making prose smoother. It requires deciding what is necessary, what is merely fluent, what should remain implicit, what should be cut, and what must be rebuilt. Preserve productive irregularity when it carries thought or voice. Remove explanation when the reader already has enough. Do not confuse elegance with improvement.

In short:

**Notice what draws your attention. Ask why it matters. Stay with it until you discover something you did not already know.**

Then:

**Write from perception and discovery. Let meaning emerge partly through implication. Let form answer to meaning. Let distinctness arise from your particular way of seeing.**

The part of writing most difficult to reproduce may not be the sentence itself.

**It may be the attention, judgment, and discovery that made the sentence necessary.**

Discussion

**One good use of AI in writing:**

Compose the sentence yourself before committing it to text.

Think the sentence through in your head. Hear its wording, syntax, rhythm, and emphasis. Revise it mentally until it says what you want it to say. When useful, imagine the next sentence too. Allow the act of making the sentence to change or deepen what you thought you were going to say.

Then write or speak the sentence yourself.

If speaking, use high-quality AI ASR (Transformer-based ASR) to transcribe it as faithfully as possible. If typing, preserve your original text.

Then ask AI to do only the following:

Preserve my wording, diction, sentence boundaries, syntax, repetitions, punctuation choices where intentional, and paragraphing. Correct only transcription errors, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and unequivocal grammatical mistakes that do not require changing my syntax. Do not paraphrase, reorder, smooth, condense, expand, add transitions, substitute synonyms, or make stylistic improvements. If correctness, clarity, or intelligibility appears to require a change to my wording or syntax, flag the passage and suggest the change separately instead of making it.