Matt Lane · Notes← All notes
2025-02-19 · Writing & craft

Prose for Business That Won't Bore the Shit Out of Your Colleagues

Be direct, succinct, aphoristic, and rhythmic. Communicate and inspire.

**Traditional:**

Our strategic initiative to digitally transform our operations will encompass multiple phases of technological integration and process optimization, aiming to enhance operational efficiency and market competitiveness.

**My Crystalline Method:**

Legacy systems devour millions.

In basement servers, ten years of habits calcify.

Digital speed destroys old markets.

Transform.

March first awakens.

Real-time data illuminates customer needs.

Each sales call converts instantly.

Paper processes dissolve.

Intelligence flows.

Screens light pathways through decision-space.

Profit accelerates.